wk 7 limerick

There once was a man from japan and he had a pan in his hand To bake some hands for the cans When he get the can has same fans When he haves some fan he eats the hands And the cands where bans

Wk 6 Sheep Dictation

Cave Animation Voice Over

This is my cave animation voice over here is the link.

200,000 years ago a country now known as Cook Islands.There was a ultimate tribe called the Cook Island soldiers.There was a mighty Mighty animal snow leopard.The snow leopard words begin up to feed The whole tribe.The three biggest and strongest Warriors had to go hunt it down there was a problem there They were halfway to clean the snow leopard but that snow leopard got away they said “tomorrow where going to find that snow leopard”.So the three mighty Warriors went back to their cave.The next day The chief of the tribe said go and find a snow leopard and bring it back to stop start at 3 Mighty worries with back they sorta snow leopard where they so it is Yesterday.They saw all there spears and arrows in the body.”They were like what He was supposed to bleed out overnight and die That's weird”.But the three mighty were very lucky because the superspares were on fire They were like “yes we do this like that”.When they killed it they went back to the tribes cave.The chief was like yes this is what we need to know so there had a beast all the time anyways and the Chief.

narrative writing

This is were writing tack here is the link for the tack so if you what to do one narrative writing.

Once upon a time there were two panthers, Pink Panther and Black Panther were their names. They were brothers living with their mother that was sick for a week. Once the mother died, they had to go live somewhere else because the FBI thought there was a murder there. So they flew to Salty Springs, there was no hotels there or anywhere to live. So they flew to Retail Row. Then they saw a sign that said, “NO PANTHERS ALLOWED.” So they drove all the way south to Flush Factory. Once they got there, they saw that it was just a factory. When they flew to Risky Rails they saw a mystery tunnel. They said they will come back when they find a house. So they flew to Paradise Palms. No house there either, too many Vikings. So they flew all the way to Wailing Woods, but there were too many cemeteries there. They thought they were going to get haunted by the Zombies that lived there. So they flew to Leaky Lakes. There was no house there. They had one more place on their list, it was called Tilted Towers. There were heaps of hotels, and the signs said “EVERYBODY’S WELCOME.” So they went to a hotel where it said, CARNIVORES HOTEL. They booked their room and flew right back to Risky Rails, and inspected the mysterious tunnel. They saw a floating house. So they walked up to the house and saw a blue hulk and a green hulk with a broken plane on their yard. They saw rusty, old, golden gears on the side of their house helping the house to hover over the mountains. When Pink Panther and Black Panther got onto the hovering island they asked the hulks, “What are you doing with the broken plane?” The hulks replied, “We are fixing it so it can fly to our factory where we make heaps of toilets for everyone.” So Black Panther and Pink Panther helped the Hulks to fix the plane and get it running. It took them three weeks to get everything in place. When it was finished the hulks were like, “How are we going to get to our factories if we don’t know how to control the plane?” Luckily the Black Panther knew how to fly the plane and he had his full licence from cars and planes. So they flew all the way up north to the factory. It was a two hour flight. Once they got to the factory, the Hulks paid them back with somewhere to live even better than Tilted Towers. It was this mansion and when the Panthers want something, they can just say it and it will magically appear right in front of them where they are sitting or laying.

To be continued….

 

Plan

When I was a Uncle

On saturday me and my family went to my cousin's baby shower. It was a cool day because I was going to be a uncle.when we had the baby shower at my nana’s house. We had a BarBeque.The BarBeque had bacon steak as well as sauce it was so good. My uncle cook the BarBeque.

Next the hole family had a rested. Then we play some games like pin the tail on the donkey volleyball and more.

Fairly we mandy the bed’s and then the big kid’s had to babysit The little kids. At the same time we all were playing on the ps3. We were playing black ops 3 2 played. The big kids played the big kids and the small kids played the small kids.

At lasted the small kids went to sleep the rest of the kid were watching moves and went to sleep too. At the end I felt so happy

welcome back

Welcome your audience back to your blog.
→ welcome back to my blog this term topic is te wa toi
Explain what you are going to be sharing in this writing: What are you going to write about in each of your body paragraphs? (Hint: look at the questions below)

What is the name of this term’s inquiry?
→ This term our topic is te wa toi it means art time
Based on our immersion assembly item and the inquiry name, what do you think we are going to be learning about this term/ what do you think we will be doing?
→ Learning what people do with art
How do you feel about this term’s inquiry topic?
→I feel so happy doing art
What do you already know which will help you with the inquiry topic?
→ that you can draw with paint patil and pencil.

What are you finding challenging/difficult at school at the moment?
→ understanding different words I haven’t heard before
What do you think could help you overcome these challenges?
→ learning the difficult words me

What do you want to achieve this term/ what are your learning goals?
→ trying to level up in my reading
How can your teachers support/ help you with achieving these goals?
→ the teachers can help me with descriptive words
Do you think the inquiry will help you achieve your goals? How?
→ yes because i can learn follow instructions.

How do you feel looking ahead at term 4? Are you excited/ nervous? Any other emotions? Explain why you feel this way. I feel happy because we can learn more about art.
→ Happy

Welcome back to my blog!

Welcome back to my blog! This term the name of our topic is Te Wā Toi it means art time ever body. This term we will be learning what people do with art. I feel so happy doing art, so this topic is good for me. I don’t know alot about art except for that you can draw with paint, pastels and pencils.

Something that I find challenging at school at the moment is understanding different words I haven’t heard before. I can try to overcome this by learning the difficult words for me. 

This term my learning goals are trying to level up in my reading and focusing on my learning. The teachers can help me with descriptive words. Yes I think this topic can help with my learning goals because I can learn to follow instructions.

Sheep POINTS OF VIEW

“I wonder who this lady is?” “Is she going to steal my baby lamb for her roast?” “I better scare her by trying to attack her.” I gave her a warning by making a loud low bleat that echoed across the entire paddock.

When I did my warning, she must have thought to run and grab one of my lambs. So I bravely ran towards my lamb before she could get there. Once I saw that the lamb was awake, I thought it was going to head butt her. To be continued...

POINTS OF VIEW

The mother sheep followed me on the prath picking up her parts she realized that I was in touching of her lam she let out a lode liep that echoed across the pack the sleeping lam lied it’s heard and tuned towards us and slowly returned back to it’s sleep as the sheep got closers and closers I thought I wanted run I strained to panck was she going to artak holed my brle i faoc I side as the sheep dojd me and ran prickly to her lam fo that was a close one call.

Narrative plan

NARRATIVE WRITING PLAN BY DEEJAY