narrative writing

This is were writing tack here is the link for the tack so if you what to do one narrative writing.

Once upon a time there were two panthers, Pink Panther and Black Panther were their names. They were brothers living with their mother that was sick for a week. Once the mother died, they had to go live somewhere else because the FBI thought there was a murder there. So they flew to Salty Springs, there was no hotels there or anywhere to live. So they flew to Retail Row. Then they saw a sign that said, “NO PANTHERS ALLOWED.” So they drove all the way south to Flush Factory. Once they got there, they saw that it was just a factory. When they flew to Risky Rails they saw a mystery tunnel. They said they will come back when they find a house. So they flew to Paradise Palms. No house there either, too many Vikings. So they flew all the way to Wailing Woods, but there were too many cemeteries there. They thought they were going to get haunted by the Zombies that lived there. So they flew to Leaky Lakes. There was no house there. They had one more place on their list, it was called Tilted Towers. There were heaps of hotels, and the signs said “EVERYBODY’S WELCOME.” So they went to a hotel where it said, CARNIVORES HOTEL. They booked their room and flew right back to Risky Rails, and inspected the mysterious tunnel. They saw a floating house. So they walked up to the house and saw a blue hulk and a green hulk with a broken plane on their yard. They saw rusty, old, golden gears on the side of their house helping the house to hover over the mountains. When Pink Panther and Black Panther got onto the hovering island they asked the hulks, “What are you doing with the broken plane?” The hulks replied, “We are fixing it so it can fly to our factory where we make heaps of toilets for everyone.” So Black Panther and Pink Panther helped the Hulks to fix the plane and get it running. It took them three weeks to get everything in place. When it was finished the hulks were like, “How are we going to get to our factories if we don’t know how to control the plane?” Luckily the Black Panther knew how to fly the plane and he had his full licence from cars and planes. So they flew all the way up north to the factory. It was a two hour flight. Once they got to the factory, the Hulks paid them back with somewhere to live even better than Tilted Towers. It was this mansion and when the Panthers want something, they can just say it and it will magically appear right in front of them where they are sitting or laying.

To be continued….