Wednesday, 18 November 2020
Understanding Descriptive Language
How does the writer say that the girl is puffed and tired? By saying My lungs were rasping like Polly's old bike pump.
What words are used to describe the wind? blustery whipped
What sentence tells you that she is high up the hill? Way below the horses looked like plastic toys
How does the writer tell us that she is afraid? The wind tore my yell from my mouth
It was my mum coming to give me a pōpō, because I did not do the dishes that mum asked me to do. so I decided to make a run for it but mum caught me, It was one very painful pōpō I was ever being given. The Next day…
The next day and went to go and clean the whole house, it took me 4 hour to clean the whole house, then my dogs went off and I went to see who it was, it was my dad.
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2020,
2020 Writing,
Deejay@ptengland school,
Mrs Tele'a,
Rm3,
team 5,
term 4,
year 7
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